In this particular example, my partner’s paper wasn’t completely done. So instead, I focused on reviewing and correcting what my partner did have while also giving my opinion on what they should focus on going forward. I made a point that what they did have was very good. I believe that their introduction was very solid and conveyed what they meant to talk about clearly and strongly. Unfortunately, the introduction was the only way for me to see how she wrote. she had quotes and maybe a topic sentence for each of the body paragraphs, but they were more outlines of where she was taking the essay than what the actual essay looked like. However, the direction I could see taking the essay looked good and I made sure she knew about that. My final piece of advice was that, for her next essay, she should focus on getting multiple paragraphs down and ready compared to having outlines for all the paragraphs, mostly so she could get more substantial feedback. Overall, I thought what she had so far was solid, but that she also had much more to add onto that wouldn’t be getting an extra set of eyes on it.